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Hell or Paradise? Part 4

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Peach packed up bottles of milk, diapers, toys and anything else she thought she needed. She even changed herself into a thicker diaper just in case if someone spooked her again and made her dump out a load it would be easier to run away instead of those smaller diapers she had on before. "Ok, I'm ready." She peeks out the door and looks around. No one was in sight. Peach quickly runs out and hid behind the giant water fountain. "Hmm…no one yet." She keeps on sneaking around and found a pink map hanging on the wall that shown where exactly West Unicorn Wing was. "Good, not too far from here." It was just a few more turns and a few halls down.
Peach ran down to the West Unicorn Wing while being sure there was no one in sight. 'You think for a brainwashing camp they'll will be guards or some sort of security around.' She thought to herself as she was checking each one of the rooms one at a time. "WHAT HAPPENED TO MY BODY?!" A girl shouted a few door down. 'Bingo!' Peach ran to the screaming door and found a cute girl holding her new big boobs and freaking out on what's happening. "AHH!!! WHAT'S GOING ON?! WHERE AM I?! HOW DID I GET HERE?! WHY I HAVE BOOBS?! AND WHERE'S MY PENIS?!" "Shh! It's ok! I'm here you recues you!" Tracey grabs a rattle and pointed it at Peach. "DON'T LIE TO ME! YOU'RE WITH THEM AREN'T YOU?!" "I'm not with these assholes you dumbass! I'm here to help you get out!" "LIER! PROVE IT!" Peach sighs as she held her head. "Ok…if I was one of these people who brainwashes you then how come I'm the only one trying to save you and your sorry ass?"
There was a small moment that the room became quite.
"Shut up." Tracy said as she turned her back on Peach.
"Look! You may not like me and I may not like you! But if we don't work together then we're screwed! They'll brain wash us and send us to The Baby Pound because some jack off says so! Now stop acting like a little bitch and help me escape!"
"Humph, do you even know HOW to get out of this place?"
"There's a bus that goes back to the human world once they dropped off another kid here, we have to find that bus when no one's looking and drive it and get out of this Hellhole!"
"Great plan, but how we're going to get out of here?! There must be a few guards walking around at this time of night."
"I thought of that but when I was sneaking around to get to your room no one was following me."
"Wow this place sucks for security."
"I know…well anyways let's go, I packed up a few things to help us on our search."
"Alright."
The two teamed up and left the room. "Hey after this do you think we can get my body back? No offence but these boobs keeps getting in the way." "Na, it's ok. These boobs are too big for anyone to like on their body." "Cool. You're not like the other girls I met, all the others girls I talked to says 'there's no such thing as too much as big boobs' and 'let the guy figure it out when it comes to escape plans!' That what always happens in the movies! But you're different, you just think like a guy and take 'no' for an answer." Peach turns to him and gave him a cold look. "Don't think you're getting lucky for two things, one, you're a girl now and I'm not gay, and two have the thought ever came to mind that I could have been a guy at first and you would have been hitting on the same sex as you?" "Crap! You're right! I'm sorry, I'm not used to being a girl. I always thought about doing it with women! But now I'm a chick! Does that mean I have to bang on some guys now if there's no reverse cure in this place?!" "Oh shut up! We'll think of something when we come to that bridge! But for now shut it!" "Ok! Ok! I'm sorry! But I'm not used to boobs!" "Suck it up!"
The two looked for hours for where they keep the bus at night, they both doubted they'll let the bus out in the open where it first parked.
"Peach…I'm tried…and hungry…and I want nachos…Peach…? Are you listening…I'm dying…Peach…?" Peach was just about to smack him and call him a big baby without realizing it she turns around and started giggling. "Silly Tracey, everything's ok." Giggle.
Peach quickly covers her mouth in fear.
"I don't have much time left!" She started to count but stopped at 64. "Crap! I'm almost 50% pure! My mind is almost gone! And I'll be stuck like this forever!!!" She wanted to cry with all her heart and Tracey grabs her and comforts her. "Hey, it's ok, let's just keep looking for that bus, ok?" Peach nods and gathers herself up. "Ok, let's g-"
Just then their mouths have been covered by wet rags. "Silly babies, its way passed your bedtimes."
Everything became dark as the air got heavy as their bodies were quickly falling to the floor.
"No…not yet…"
That was all Peach could say before she completely passed out.
Hours passed as Peach and Tracey were waking up finding themselves in dirty diapers and were nearly hanging from the ceiling by white metal chains. The room was pink room with white stone bricks as the floor and most of the walls with no windows for sun light. The only source of light was a ceiling lamp that was shaped as a hear heart and window with white bars between it from a pink wooden that had white bars.
"Naughty! Naughty! Naughty babies! You should know better not to try to escape from this perfect place! The Leader is very upset with you! But at last you get to play Eddy!" A girl with pink hair and blue eyes giggled between the bars just before leaving. "WHO'S EDDY?! AND WHO IS THIS LEADER?! HELP!!! SOMEONE HELP!!!" Tracey screamed for her life as the girl pushed a red button on the other side of the wall. "WILL YOU SHUT UP?!"
The room became quite.
"I don't hear anything…" Tracey said.
"Shh! It's very faint…"
Tracey listens again and hears something rushing through the walls.
"Yeah…it kinda sounds like-"
Just then big green tentacles burst through the cracks of the old walls and grabs their upper bodies, ripping them off the chains like it was nothing.
"Ohh…new people! Punishment time!"
"THE THING TALKS?!" They both shouted in surprised as they were being lifted in the air and having their diaper bottoms being mush around in circles on their bottoms by Eddy's tentacles. "STOP! PLEASE!" "WE'LL BE GOOD! REALLY! JUST LET US GO!" They didn't like the creamy feeling that Eddy was doing to them but Eddy ignores their cries for mercy and stared grabbing their legs and nearly lifting them up over their heads and started sliding their butts on the floor, making them rub their butts on the floor. "Wee! Isn't this fun?!" He shouted as the girls screamed.
Three days passed of this nonstop punishment without a single diaper change, the girls from outside even gave Eddy wooden paddles to even spank their bottoms instead of using his tentacles. "Ok girls! If you can count as far as you can to 100 for me I might open the door for you two!" The same girl from before who placed them in there earlier asked them.
Peach started first. "24, 25, 26, 27, 28…that's all I got lady!" Peach giggled. "And Tracey, how high can you count sweetie?" She giggled before letting Tracey count. She started counting. "55, 56, 57, 58, 59…nothing…" "Ok that's nearly half for you; you two may come out now." She unlocks the door and let the two girls out. "Thanks Eddy for keeping an eye on these girls!" "Anytime! Find me another playmate soon!" "Will do!" Eddy sinks back into his wall as the door closes.
"Mushy is fun to wiggle in!" Peach cheered as she was wiggling her butt on the floor, playing in her three day old mess she made. "Peach! Get up! This isn't like you!" "Waa! You're scaring me! Waa!" Peach hides behind the pink haired lady. "Now, now, Tracey's isn't pure yet, but don't worry, if she needs another few days in the Eddy's Room again then she'll be nicer." "No! I'm fine! Umm…I'm just a bit moody from missing nap time! Really!" "Well young lady, I'll take you back to your mother's and let you nap, ok?" Tracey nods and let her take them back to their assign rooms.
"Oh Peachy! Mommy missed you!" Peach's mother grabs her and swings her around the room. "Don't you ever do that again young lady! You're place is here!" "I'm sorry mommy…my head wasn't thinking all that great. I know I've been bad." "Well you're home now, let's clean that diaper up and get you your nap, ok?" "Ok mommy! I love you!" Peach gave her a big hug right before she was cleaned up and place to bed.
It was the same thing for Tracey, her mother crying, a lecture, a diaper change and a nap.
'This I will not stand for! I'm getting my and Peach's asses out of here before-' Suddenly images of cute white bunnies and happy thoughts filled Tracey's mind. 'What's happening?! Why can't I think straight?! Ahh!!! My head!!!' Tracey grinds her teeth trying to think of her passed life before she came here.
She could only recover a little more than half of what she had left in her mind. "THINK YOU BASTERED!!! THINK!!!" She held her head screaming in her mind to try to think of her lost memories. "Tracey dear, you ok?" Her mother saw her in a cold sweat. "Yeah…I'm fine…just…a headache…" "Would you like some medicine honey?" "Well I-" But before Tracey could finished Mother shoved a suppository in her butt. "All better honey?" "No…!" "Do you need another?" "No! I'm fine! Really!" "Alright then, time for lunch anyways." Tracey's mother just pops a big bottle of milk in her mouth. "Now finish all that up and I'll make you a nice bowl of oatmeal!" She skips off as she giggled. 'Why can't I stop sucking on this stupid thing?!' It was like her mouth had a mind of its own. Tracey tries to pull it out but her mouth let go the second she finished up the bottle.
'Finally!' She pulled it out and her Mother picked her up and sat her in a white highchair to feed her lunch. "Hey! I'm not hungr-" Before she could finish Mother shoved a spoonful of green spinach down her throat. "See? Yummy!" "Stop you bit-" Another spoonful was shoved in her mouth. "It's not nice to talk with your mouthful, I just want to feed you before your play date with Peach." "PLAY DATE?! I'M NOT GOING ON SOME STUPID-" Tracey thought for a moment about this and thought it was a perfect idea to make a plan to help her and Peach to think of an idea to escape. "I mean…gee mommy! I would love to go!" "That's my good girl. But before we leave Eddy did a number on your cute bottom Because you pooped a full diaper in one blow." Mother giggled as Tracey looked behind her and blushed.
Contest time!!!
Whoever draws the best from the girls getting punished by Eddy will win a sneak peek at the new chapter!
The better you draw it the most likely you'll win!
So make it detailed as you possibly can!
Remember Eddy never shows his true face, so just draw creepy eyes in the cracks in the walls!
But let your mind go free!
P.S. No showing of sexual body parts but if you do make it sexy DO NOT go beyond a 7 in the lath of 1 though 10.
Thank you and good luck! :giggle:
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